After reading Alan's peer review, I realized that the introduction to my topic was a little off as it didn't quite give the exact point i was trying to make. I feel like I need to rework my opening statements to better suit the webtext, as well as making the transition from one subtopic to the next a little less confusing. I might also need to add in some details about people using Star Wars as a way of teaching the monomyth. I will also need to begin writing the history portion of webtext.
The main thing I need to work on is the style of my webtext. I definitely need to add color, pictures, and font changes. It is pretty boring visually right now.
After the Conference:
I do have a few places where i need to add more citation, as well as fix previous citations. Again the visual aspect needs to be worked on. I need to make sure I keep the same tone, probably need to rewrite a few sections.
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